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©2008-2009 ~Clemenestra
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I tried to draw a background for the picture for :iconrobstasy: but as you can see I failed dramatically. It's simple but I somehow screwed it up anyway >: ...I'm not even sure if you can tell that it's a moon...

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:iconakikorossella:
pretty!!

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:iconrobstasy:
its more a bell than a moon! If there would be also light, nearly white or absolutely white areas it wwould be a wonderfull image of an bell, if thats the right word. I for your part would have been: #1 easier wih color for the moon. Infact it is white, if you ook up, but your right, in a serious ancle it looks yellow, but who cares ;P yellow or not, this is the most shiniest thing around the whole scenerie, and so it has to be lighter.
but more improtant is the moon structure. You knew that there has to be a variety of color on the moon surface.. So you made these 2 or 3 darker areas, which are not bad from the color, but nonsense in the object. My advice now understandable thanks to the great examlpe:

- If you want to draw the moon .. look at the moon! :) Take a real and a "close" watch, not on computer, in real. ^^ If you havent got on hand what you want to draw, maybe a gigantic sword or an energy ball ^^ then imagine the object as it would look like in real, refer to former experiences and create reputation in your head, you can refer too.-
*Think about what you draw*

with tha backround of the background, the stars, I cant help you. But I know it would have looked better if the blackness behjind would be in one color and quality. That would do a lot.


One question: My contest ends in two days. May you maybe enter this work, or if you rework it a bit, for this event? Even if its propably not winning, you can party :) And your work will become an card in my game project.

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:iconmeedleboot:
I think it's really pretty. It makes Oddeysiana stand out more.
:iconclemenestra:
aww, thanks c:

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92% of teenagers would die if Abercrombie and Fitch said that it's uncool to breathe. If you'd be the 8% laughing, put this in your sig.
:iconclemenestra:
See, I told you I suck at backgrounds xD;

I really don't think that this deserves to become a card in your game project

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92% of teenagers would die if Abercrombie and Fitch said that it's uncool to breathe. If you'd be the 8% laughing, put this in your sig.
:iconrobstasy:
:) you dont think so? ^^
Its not the best quality, of corse, but I like the motiv itself. It is for sure a kinda common motiv, but nothing I or one of the ones I watch are used to do. And Its kind a odd. Anyway I use hundreds and hundreds of artworks. At least some interim artworks I could recorrect or replace them on my own later are allways in need.
Additional: Would you like the thought to be a part of something international, something maybe big?

And its an serious offer to you. I wouldnt just steal your artwork ;) SO if you want to keep it, keep it. If you would like to take part, then give official note here: [link]

Thought of that? ;) Every work I got helps me to finally play the game in a good state as soon as possible ^^ You can note me anytime if you want me to use one of your artworks, and maybe your news will become beter because of that, too?
Rock on :horns:

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:iconrobstasy:
ah, and do it within the next day if you choosed to. Because its only one day left ^^

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